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I want dreams to be bright.

Sight unfolding past blackness
bold in its misting of drip-like
motel stalactites, it's how I want
yellows bursting past
sunken eyes, full with greens
so unseen in these leaking pipes,
lazy windpipes -
loves and hope in images
that dreams may be -

that leave, faint, while
some narrow bridge between
world and mind,
mindsight as it is,
boastless arrives;
so thus then get up with little
soul-lights left flickering on,
on after that first leap
into the sudden unremembered
sky of some long gone feeling deep inside.
©2009 ~Ghrey
:iconghrey:

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i'm not at home
i hope you like it,
i'm trying to create while i have what time

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:iconamberwind:
I can honestly say I'm having a bit of trouble with this one. I feel it sticking on my back teeth and I need to chew on it like gum, or jerky.

I'll try this again when I'm more awake. Mental coffee might help.

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:iconpereubuisjesus:
The words in this flow kind of unnaturally...its odd.

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See you space cowboy...
:iconghrey:
i have some ideas on how to edit it, so give it another chance when i do?

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:icon4moku2:
I actually like this one...makes a little more sense than what you normally produce...at least within the given context. :)

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:iconghrey:
hahaha, thanks i guess :)

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Bore, n.: A person who talks when you wish him to listen.
:iconghrey:
there are a few lines i am thinking about reworking, but i hope you can find some meaning in this. :)

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Bore, n.: A person who talks when you wish him to listen.
:icon4moku2:
Most welcome. :)

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I'd rather know I was crazy than think I was sane.

~Member of the 3eyes [link] club! Inanely Inspired Insanity~ =)
:iconpereubuisjesus:
No that was an aspect I liked about it lol

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See you space cowboy...
:iconghrey:
oh, hahaha, cool

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Bore, n.: A person who talks when you wish him to listen.

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